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The Name's Crystal

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"Freezing, quiet, dark...

It's Winter...bitch."
Okay, so this is about a girl named Crystal; she's the...spirit of Winter, let's say. She's just kind of describing herself to others.

Okay, so the last three words-- the pause before bitch-- i kind of took it from Britteny from Glee (season 2, episode 2: "...I'm more talented than all of you, I can see that clearly now...it's Britney...bitch.")

Alright, so that’s it :wave:

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I like the rule of three you have used here and the way you have said the last line quite viciously.

I'm not sure that the ellipses is effective in the last line... like I imagine us being guided ever so slowly, with false pretence in "Freezing, quiet, dark..." and then we suddenly get the surprise of our life with "It's Winter, bitch."

But that is just me. xD

I like the many ways you can interpret this. From the title, I feel as if the true name is Winter, but then you can see it in so many ways. :nod: