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The Dress...

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"Here!"

"Hell no!"

"Why not...?"

"Frillies!"
This is for :iconsixwordstories:’s 52 Week Six Word Story Challenge

This Week's Theme:
A diologue only story

-_- This is me and my older sister...execpt for the frillies part...she's forever trying to dress me!

=D Tell me what you think!
:X But be polite!
:) Enjoy!
:XD:

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3wyl's avatar
I feel that you could ditch the... emotions, or emoticons or whatever they are and format the piece so that it reflects the emotions, if that makes sense?

Allow us to come to our own conclusions on the feelings and thoughts, though I have to say that the prompts are quite cool too...

...but yeah, it's a shame that you can't add more to the six word story form, I guess.

Lovely stuff, anyway! :D